Throw Your Cameras In The Air, And Wave 'em Like You Just Don't Care

Someday, Somehow
I'm Gonna Make It Alright
But Not Right Now
(sorry I got this in really REALLY late....=[)

Part contest entry from semisweet003(link to contest here http://semisweet003.buzznet.com/user/journal/3597081/dark-theres-hole-where-something/), part experiment on my part.....
I want your guy's honest opinion. Should I keep experimenting with my liquid eyeliner to see what I can come up with, or give it up altogether?
Honestly, guys. The truth? And I won't feel bad, promise.